I was scared to tell.
Thank you for helping me release another layer.
I'm test driving for finally writing the book-so I need criticism. Don't let me off too easy & you've all helped me get over the first phase of stage fright.
I don't want to be boring, or scare people, or make them feel sorry for me, or get stroked. It has to be purposefully, factual, readible and accessible----and remind people who they are and capable of getting through everything-and joyous.
Thais even did this cool thing-for I was working off my general memory-and her research made me feel better that I wasn't exaggerating or timeshedding. Not so good at time.
Thank you-but please do include critical analysis too. I would appreciate it.
love you all,
linnyx
ps-I didn't know what i was doing until after it had been(as usual). love and thanx (edit)